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The Cure
By BlackRobedMage
How long must I wait for my finale demise
Forever cold with sorrow filled eyes
Run into darkness my only reprieve
Torment in light is all I recieve
Bled of all life, alone and cold
A heart no longer beating, spirit sold
Drained of all will to live or to die
No longer searching for reasons why
Numb to the core, time stands still
In my mind it always will
Veins unwhole, blood on the floor
Heaven's angels beat on the door
Light floods through an empty room
Shadows echo my very doom
Screams of denile fill the air,
But those around don't seem to care
Gentle beems taunt and tease
Curing me of my disease
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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Wednesday, December 17, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Cure"
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On Monday, July 17, 2017, worm
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wrote:
if you were going for dark... you hit the nail on the head...
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
A great write..laced with darkness and appeal...Well done//-Methos
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On Thursday, December 18, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
This is good! I hope you post more soon, I'm looking forward to reading more, just let me know when you do.
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A former member wrote:
Hmm...not bad. Not bad at all. It had a really nice flow. And remember, we are our own worst critics. You may think that this isn't a worthwhile read, but I see 4 of us now that disagree.
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2003, Jadednoir
(28) wrote:
"Shadows echo my very doom..." very great line here... me likey:p ~Jaded
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2003, BlackRobedMage
(16) wrote:
It's true though. I know there a lot of young writers around here who are amazing and I can only give you my best effort. My work is nothing special... just thoughts like everyone else.
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A former member wrote:
well, after reading"'m only 15, what do you expect? " and then this poem, you derserve more credit than you give yourself!
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
very nice piece, keep it up ,thanks for sharing
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