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- "this is all.devouring, and cerebral in its reading, its mainline configurations and demensions/ dementia. . . . and i am so partial to that closing couplet. wish you'd post more."
Posted by Unknown on "Homogeneous presence" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Necessity does not drive us - we convince ourselves of the necessity and follow through the seemingly logical conclusion. Sanity; what rubric does a man ascribe himself. What moral code is truly universal and standard?
Shoot at the sky, but hide underground - buried heads in sand (safety in numbers)
The notion of the absurd - the outsider - stranger. We take the bus with them, we hold their hands, we make love to them on cold mornings with the stink of old teeth and stale fluoride. Ridicule is the ridiculous reaching outside themselves in order to maintain the status quo within themselves.
We make ourselves from little nothings, and we are mighty amongst our equally inferior brethren.
"We barely remember, who or what came before..."
Apologies for the tedious length of my comment."
Posted by Solace on "Eye Shards." by Dancing_Monkey
- "this is still such astounding hypnosis.....a falling through the reverie...a c.rush at the bottom, looking and blinking up in so much brilliance....so very pretty. "
Posted by Unknown on "Come Sweet Unknown." by Dancing_Monkey
- "What a great poem! Vulnerable, clever and wicked in that order of obviousness. Its my evil monkey! :p by wicked and evil I am actualy thinking about the ruthless honesty in your poetry .. also your ruthless honest view of everything as a person."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Eye Shards." by Dancing_Monkey
- "Very heady piece here. Exhibits your talent very clearly. I can see this is one of those that will take a few readings for me to fully enjoy. Just the way I like them. Let's the words marinate in my brain and bring out the flavor of the "meat." 10 indeed, well done! Draven"
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Shards." by Dancing_Monkey
- "midnight always has such slippery fingers...y'know, I do a special happy dance every time you post ;) ...love it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Eye Shards." by Dancing_Monkey
- "I have missed reading your unique wordspin Peter. There always seems to be dark undercurrents in all your writing with a silver lining mixed in there. refreshing to say the least *leaves bananas and steals hat* ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Eye Shards." by Dancing_Monkey
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