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- "they say imitation is the highest compliment... I can hear his voice behind these words, impeccable structure... unsurpassed mimicry. this is better than little cats and rivals dreams deferred..."We passed their graves: / The dead men there, / Winners or losers, / Did not care. / In the dark / They could not see / Who had gained / The victory." --"Peace" The WWII decade."
Posted by Unknown on "What happens when a dark poet dies?" by Liz
- "assuming you have a pillow, it is just like a man to think only of his pillows, and to react violently to the inanimate object that disrupts his rest. But, seriously, when we conceive of the world in logical terms, are we not imposing a binary system on something that may defy logic, that may exhibit properties and possibilities that cannot be accounted for by reason, that cannot be expressed in language or logic? what is it that we love when we love logic... logocentrism... is that a perspective on the world that provides us security, safety, and confidence that we are in control, that we can discover the answers and that ultimately the world will make sense to us because we will cram it into our logical bed of crustaceans and discard all that does not fit under our preconceived and unforgiving systematic black/white, true/false, sound/unsound security blanket? Just a thought. The sentiment here is endearing, I just had to be difficult. "
Posted by Unknown on "logophiliac" by Liz
- "The chill of night, wet grass, unheard pounding music...I really like this poem, Liz. The rhymes were just right and the rhythm made it so pleasant on the tongue. And the story... I do adore this so."
Posted by nur hidayah on "The Rebellious Mexican Rock Band Singer" by Liz
- "This I find to be a very thought-provoking poem. Poignant in its simplicity, but full of a message. ....-Samone"
Posted by Unknown on "for all to see" by Liz
- "Beautiful.. "To know nothing, but feel everything." Excellent write!"
Posted by Bluegirl on "Crippled" by Liz
- "Great piece - the parallel to a computer made it a bit creepy for me, as it boiled us down to a very functional level...which left me feeling very "unspecial". Interesting thoughts. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "reBoot" by Liz
- "Oh... Yes. That is all I can say. You stole the words right out of my brain, and made them more eloquent than I could ever have hoped to accomplish."
Posted by Raven on "reBoot" by Liz
- "lol this was genious on so many levels...put a smile on my face"
Posted by Unknown on "logophiliac" by Liz
- "Hmm, that might be worth changing. Anybody else agree w/ elisa?"
Posted by Liz on "’Tis the Season" by Liz
- "lmao@elisa, well i've got all my presents, just annoyed i have to wrap them now, like spending money on people who don't deserve it isn't enough...pfft."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "’Tis the Season" by Liz
- "It's like a list of things viewed through the eyes of the damned... I love how you did this. Have a holly jolly hell, indeed... :)"
Posted by Raven on "’Tis the Season" by Liz
- "As soon as i read "jingle bell rock" i was hoping for the poem to go to the tune!! - DAMN - short and sweet though."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "’Tis the Season" by Liz
- "I like this.. it's very nicely done and it makes you really think.. I must admit I would cry if someone I loved disapeared from dp... I care for a lot of people here and that will never change.. nicely done. -JiNx(ie)"
Posted by JiNx on "What happens when a dark poet dies?" by Liz
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