Comments by All Members
- "Great write,,made me think of being a kid playing out In a feild and mom yelling it's time to go home as the Sun sets over the hill,,lots of good memories from this simple poem,,thanx,,,"
Posted by Jerry stiles on "Still, I Wake." by TheProphetUntold
- "I can definitely see why you are one of the best poets around here. The emotions that this brought forth are very hard to articulate. Nice job, sir! Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "The Widest Scope." by TheProphetUntold
- "The minimal nature of the tanka definitely lends well to the context, and there's always this sense of timelessness I admire in your work, ancient truths enduring. I' always impressed to see just what my fellow poets can fashion from a block."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Widest Scope." by TheProphetUntold
- "This breathed through ages then sunk all hope like a millstone to the bottom of the well ... that's a cold hard comfort ... way to break a block , it's an iceberg , nine tenths hidden..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Widest Scope." by TheProphetUntold
- "I find myself wondering if the man there before you made it out alive once you came in...but, then again, we do know that water is a soul-hungry element and will do any thing to get its metaphorical hands on the heart of someone that knows its true self. Just a stunning presentation from pacing to formatting. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "The Man in the Lake." by TheProphetUntold
- "Been a long while, and yet the charm never fades. This has that timeless quality to it that weathers change such as the sky.. glad this came up, it's nice to visit on your works again.."
Posted by Skye on "She Swallowed the Sky." by TheProphetUntold
- "I've always loved reading you, and still do..your writes are magical and soul stirring..leaving me without the right words to comment correctly..Sometimes I'm rendered speechless..I can say Such beautiful writes shouldn't go unnoticed and greatly deserve more comments..You spin such vivid images, the ending of this shatters my heart. *hugs to you tpu* I hope you continue to enchant with your words."
Posted by River Lily on "I Think I'll Go For a Drive." by TheProphetUntold
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