Still, I Wake.

By TheProphetUntold

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I close.

On dreams of open fields, 
an' mother's voice callin'
the sun down o'er the hills.

Whose smolder'd sky yields
heaven's diamonds fallin'
an' others blinkin', still.

Therein fingers trace
a map to ev'ry place.

Eyes closed, I say:
"Where solace waits."
an' open the gates.


...





Yet 'tis here,
still, I wake.









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(Dreams are far too short.)

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Copyright 2013 TheProphetUntold
Published on Monday, January 11, 2021.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jerry stiles On Sunday, March 5, 2017, Jerry stiles (235)By person wrote:

    Great write,,made me think of being a kid playing out In a feild and mom yelling it's time to go home as the Sun sets over the hill,,lots of good memories from this simple poem,,thanx,,,

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, June 1, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...you dream a wide land & sky, & Vincent's starry night...

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