Comments by All Members
- "I aggeree with all Ainsof has said. I'm ^V^ by the way; and yes, welcome. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "she" by keltruth7
- "I love that last line... vulnerability... is there a more scintillating scent than the smell of vulnerability...... from the breath of hunters.....or maybe she is all that... but so much more.... nice write. Welcome to the Valley, as V would say."
Posted by Unknown on "she" by keltruth7
- "hmmmm.... I'm gonna go with content rather than form tonight.... immersed in the subject.. . the substance..... bitterness... resentment... such a plague and disease... a contagion that we contract from deception and lies... something Nietzsche nailed with his hammer..... very interesting write
Welcome to the Valley."
Posted by Unknown on "shadowed" by keltruth7
- "the longing in this piece is painful to read for it reflects how i have ever felt time and time again. i can deeply relate.
Shadow Poet "
Posted by Unknown on "in the wake of" by keltruth7
- "whoa. the anger coming from this write is just intense. awesome thought.
Shadow Poet"
Posted by Unknown on "never knew" by keltruth7
- "I too am familiar with such bitterness, and like Malcholm struggles make for excellent poetry, I really liked this, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "stranger me" by keltruth7
- "Great poem, your thoughts are very welcomed. I have one opinion, the 3rd line maybe shouldn't end in 'the'... I thought a little of the flow was lost. I think you can say what you wanted in 2 lines or 3. Thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "shadowed" by keltruth7
- "Shameless, yes. But without it, no dark poetry. I see the dark, maybe it's a part of me. I love to write about it, cause it colors me so. Thanks for the write. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "machine" by keltruth7
- "Well written, so sad. Too bad you didn't title this piece. This reminded me of what someone told me once.. 'lost away dreams'... Use it if you want... Thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "untitled" by keltruth7
- "Wow, struggles, struggles, strugles. Without them their wouldn't be any great poetry to read. 'stranger than fiction, stranger of me'... Brilliant line. Thanks for the write. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "stranger me" by keltruth7
- "I am over-taken! Blown away.... I love this style.. 'saturated souls, timeless, endless matter'... Brilliant lines, thanks. I must apologize, sometimes good poetry is quickly lost due to the large amount of poems being posted. You'll not be missed again. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "done" by keltruth7
- "This gave me a lot of interesting visuals and left me wondering. A vivid read. "
Posted by Dilated View on "done" by keltruth7
- "perhaps it is what others cannot see then again it could be what others see but are to afraid to speak out loud or accept as truth...well written"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "shadowed" by keltruth7
- "For some reason this poem made me think of ones struggle with drugs...their addiction...how they had to have it to function, to survive.. It was a thought provoking poem. Thanks for the write. Loved it."
Posted by Rowan on "straight" by keltruth7
- "When I read this I think of the struggles I have with my enemy. She too would let me burn. Some days I win...some days she does. This was written in such a way it can be taken by many and made to fit their life. Good job there =)"
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "stranger me" by keltruth7
- "thinking things u never thought u would think seeing things in ways u never sought ....its like when u first start driving off that high u have to reteach urself how to do everything u were doing ...but with a sense of subtraction ... keep teaching and you will know how to live it"
Posted by Unknown on "straight" by keltruth7
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