never knew

By keltruth7

i thought you understood
felt my pain 
the way i showed you was so deep
i cut you with my knife
locked you in that state of mind
made you breathe the fumes
smell the stench of  despair
showered in my tears
i cried out to you but you never really knew
i hoped you would come for me
crawling through that sewer
the gutless existence you follow
has led me to believe
you were never 
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Copyright 2010 keltruth7
Published on Sunday, March 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Saturday, June 12, 2010, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Why didn't I know about this till now?? I'm not exactly "playing " on your title; I'll explain later. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: So deep, so touching. I feel the pain. Incredible write.

  • A former member wrote: whoa. the anger coming from this write is just intense. awesome thought. Shadow Poet

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