Newsom
By theXkevorkian
I close my eyes to
transidental explosions
of all light and color
the
expanse of darkness is profound
synapsis firing
as the euphonix
tickle my ears
So hypnotic
the breadth of sound
eyes drifting from side to side
as the wave penetrates my ears
in a rotary motion
expansive delusion
an ambivalent suprise
the blanket of my pillow
recounting the lies
repetitive arpegiation
making the cognitive grow
where silence meets melody
unambiguous the flow
sublingual and resonant
the voice
from afar
keeping
my choice
and vagary
revealing
my scars
it 's cold
outside
I am alive ?!?
Comments on "Newsom"
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On Saturday, September 22, 2012, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
The visuals used here left me feeling like I was dreaming vivid chaos and, at the end, waking with a start. Each line strung me along as if against my will. Chaotically wonderful :)
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, keltruth7
(18) wrote:
woah, i want to read this over and over and then again!
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Wow, that poem is alive! The you write the visuals are some of the best I've seen. Thank-you.
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On Wednesday, February 17, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
Beautifully worded. Flows nicely.
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A former member wrote:
This was soothing and peaceful, yet a darkness there. Lovely piece. =)