Cure {Or is it?}
By melodies revisited
A work inspired by Disease
The bleeding masses
Pass along the curses
These monsters
we become
When we come undone
It's not a gimick, not an
act
When I talk about my past
I told you forever and I
meant
What I said, I needn't repent
I saw the scars of past
days
And I touched you anyway
I reached out and told you
Something I now tell few
Now rain is falling in my heart
Wanna know the funny part?
The mask I wore wasn't to hide
The disease deep inside
It was to hide the fact that I...
I want to...
Fall into your arms
Be your everything
Pull the strings of your heart
And you be everything to me
Can't you see that?
Yet you want to call me a disease
You
look at me and I cease
To breathe even a little bit
My thoughts
stop and I sit
Blown away by your smile,
Your laughter,
and all the while
You think I laugh at you when
You're feeling
down again.
But you refuse to see the cure
Among this disease
of yours
I tried to pick you up when you fell
But you didn't
want to leave Hell
I tried to be your cure, but all I will be
Is your dying disease.
Author's Note:
The last two lines sparked this poem, and I really like it. All about how you see it, I suppose....Awards
Comments on "Cure {Or is it?}"
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Congrats on POTD! At first, I thought it would be dark throughout, but it ended in such lovely despair, in such helplessness; this work was awesome in all its contrasts and paces. Brava!
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A former member wrote:
This is awesome it gets me thinking of All the stuff in my past.... It shows true beauty in a suffering moment. thank you for writing.
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A former member wrote:
Ugh... and your 17... That is amazing. Your one helluva writer. This one made me feel rejected, but I still liked it.
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On Wednesday, January 6, 2010, theXkevorkian
(64) wrote:
Wow . I, love the vulnerability you convey in this ..... And Sin said it well it does make me feel rejected also ... Keep it up .... Write On :)