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shadowed
By keltruth7
Dark shadows on my soul, from fear and loathe
bitterness slowly slides
amongst my evil thoughts
this is learned from those who tell us
so, from those we deem to trust behind scenes of deception and lies.
its familiar
it shuts us up
are our minds broken or damaged
beyond repair,
or can i see what some simply chose not
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Copyright 2010 keltruth7
Published on Sunday, January 31, 2010.
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"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2011, theXkevorkian
(65)
wrote:
The ability to see reality is a gift.... Write On :)
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A former member wrote:
hmmmm.... I'm gonna go with content rather than form tonight.... immersed in the subject.. . the substance..... bitterness... resentment... such a plague and disease... a contagion that we contract from deception and lies... something Nietzsche nailed with his hammer..... very interesting write
Welcome to the Valley.
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, keltruth7
(18) wrote:
good point! ive took "the" out.
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Great poem, your thoughts are very welcomed. I have one opinion, the 3rd line maybe shouldn't end in 'the'... I thought a little of the flow was lost. I think you can say what you wanted in 2 lines or 3. Thanks for the write.
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193) wrote:
Some events in life push people to different levels. I think you see what others cannot. Nicely written.
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On Sunday, January 31, 2010, theXkevorkian
(65) wrote:
Short , but I can relate .... I often wonder if they really can't see what is happening ..... Or just don't care ..... Write On :) Welcome to DP
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