straight

By keltruth7

never been bold without substance
always needed to lift
doing it on my own now
living in my head
living with my thoughts
straight and narrow
straight and narrow
gotta keep on now
straight and narrow
straight and narrow
this is really me
im so scared now
just wanna waste now
i thought i would feel free
its too late now
its too late now
i just have to be

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Published on Sunday, February 21, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "straight"

On Tuesday, January 18, 2011, theXkevorkian (64) wrote:

This reminds me of a personal struggle with addiction..... Straight and narrow...... I remind myself this all the time..... Write On :)
On Saturday, June 12, 2010, veingo (526) wrote:

"straight and narrow" The repeated line, and the actual shape of the write. I like both muchly. ^V^
A former member wrote: Yeah, that ..'wanna waste now' left a bad taste in my mouth
On Monday, June 7, 2010, keltruth7 (18) wrote:

in what way?
On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

Well done, good flow. 'I just wanna waste now'... What a great line. Thanks.
On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Rowan (197) wrote:

For some reason this poem made me think of ones struggle with drugs...their addiction...how they had to have it to function, to survive.. It was a thought provoking poem. Thanks for the write. Loved it.
A former member wrote: thinking things u never thought u would think seeing things in ways u never sought ....its like when u first start driving off that high u have to reteach urself how to do everything u were doing ...but with a sense of subtraction ... keep teaching and you will know how to live it
On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192) wrote:

We learn from repetition...so keep going. Don't stop. It's good.
On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Dilated View (582) wrote:

This read almost like the repetition was there to convince yourself of your own words. An intriguing read, makes me wonder what this is referencing. Thanks for sharing.