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By keltruth7

I fell into you're arms
lost in you're dreams
broken by you're silence
held by you're breath
smothered in you're laugh
taken away
the light left you're eyes
I wore the pain
a weight clung
my head broke
 

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Copyright 2010 keltruth7
Published on Tuesday, February 2, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Saturday, June 12, 2010, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Hmm. I might have changed the last word in this one, but then it would be mine & not yours. I like it yours.. ^V^

  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Well written, so sad. Too bad you didn't title this piece. This reminded me of what someone told me once.. 'lost away dreams'... Use it if you want... Thanks for the write.

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    Sadness entwines itself until something is broken...a heart. So sad. I felt a loss.

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