Comments by All Members
- "I'd call down the wrath of the galaxy on her too...you can't take a man's cat!...but then...you'll have to rescue the cat first ;) ... much enjoyed Malcholm "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
- "This was so well composed...such collaboration of great references, even though quite afraid for her, (would never want to get on your bad side ;) I find the labyrinths of your mind captivating! She stole your hear, I mean cat, damn! Maybe she wanted you to follow ;) Very nice write!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
- "Dawm i dont have a cat but i would be pist!!! if somebody took my snake what an asshole
steel the cat back"
Posted by Unknown on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
- "I really liked the space and sci-fi mixture. You want her to be cut in half by a lightsaber and to be eaten by Venusian blood worms? Guess that's good old fashioned space karma for stealing your cat lol. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
- "loved the last part the most, it drips with anger and sarcasm, i love it. the references to space really intrigued me, intriguing write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
- "I would love to be able to leave a comment that would describe my fascination with this piece but I can't think of good enough words, other than a masterpiece! Amazing work!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Tears In The Dark" by Malcholm Dark
- "Wow, this held my attention with a great pull. Walking the steps of your determined tries to break the silent pen demon reminded me of my own encounters with the white paper and its intimidation at times. My idea is on the tip of the pen but it is almost as if my fingers are in a cast paralyzed and incapable. How wonderful that feeling is when one can break the cast and move again :) I love your happy ending. I am so fond of this piece in every aspect of the word! So good!!!!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Lost And Found" by Malcholm Dark
- "Hit me hard as well, the style seemed to lend itself to the sorrowful feelings emanating from this piece, as if they fed from one another. Remembrance is part of the healing process, the suture thread for your wounds. Write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Still" by Malcholm Dark
- "the jagged remains of the heart heal slowly, like a time released capsule that we are destined to suffer, this hit home. Like a baseball bat between the eyes. As always you impress. "
Posted by Amphigorist on "Still" by Malcholm Dark
- "Wow, this hit me hard. It fosters fresh wounds and I can not skip on admitting how much I relate. The work is so well executed and somewhat an etiquette of expressive write most honest. Very nice indeed! "
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Still" by Malcholm Dark
- ""Feel the flaming rape of logic" Brutally horrific, painfully beautiful. "Hear black water slip from the roof". I will have to re-visit this poem. Very well conceived, our extensions of self. And beyond. Cheers."
Posted by jonLyndon on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
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