Comments by All Members
- "you are quite correct in your diagnosis... it was me who was being stupid in my reply... your comments are most valued... thanks "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "This is really great. It's so original and well written. Overwhelming with pain yet really entertaining. "
Posted by Unknown on "Missing Her" by Malcholm Dark
- "I really enjoyed this. Very unusual imagery. "I make travel plans for lemmings" Love that line and the ending.
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Posted by Unknown on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "....possibly the reason for this is I am not really great at giving diagnosis so much as painting your portrait in perhaps a similar approach as I have used above ;) pardon my abstract ways of looking at your work sir, for it was only intended to explore the depths of this fine fine piece :)"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "These inkblots draw maps of your needles in coconut stacks.......like transcendent dalmatians leading abstract paths under the indigo skies to your hidden wonderlands and neverlands. Thank you for unfolding such true and brilliant visions of you!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "Such intriguing thoughts, needles in haystacks, travel plans for lemmings, inkblots. Wrangling coconuts in the shadows of your mind, like wandering thoughts searching for answers? Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "I saw Willard in these words, for some reason.... put the lime in the coconut.... the tequila in the glass haha wrap that world up in joker and stick a flame to his ass .... cheers man.... this had a goat-footed feel to it... stay strong, bottoms up!"
Posted by Unknown on "Trapped" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha...the big charade...what lies hidden behind the masks that we wear?...what stories lie behind the eyes of the dead..nice..very nice..have we not all been a sideshow freak at least once.."
Posted by Amphigorist on "Circus Freak" by Malcholm Dark
- "LOL...you have inspired me...how about........................anal retentive...crushed syllables like bound feet...poetic cripple...
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Posted by kinkifrog on "Damn The Haiku " by Malcholm Dark
- "This was steamy! Either in a sensual or a plate of hot delicious food sort of way. I'm torn between the kitchen and the bedroom..... I feel funny! Where is the hot 'sauce' ;) This was excellent!!!"
Posted by The Coloured Cello on "Peel Away My Layers" by Malcholm Dark
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