Comments by All Members
- "This was very intriguing to me. As the years pass I sometimes find myself experiencing the skepticism of the hypocrisy.....as is that verse....This was from your heart, and truthful. Nice write"
Posted by UnrequitedDream on "Your Father Who Art..." by T-Nothing
- "I could relate to that, it sucks when your finally too far gone, and that's when you realize things were a lot better before, you captured that perfectly. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Say Goodbye" by T-Nothing
- "thanx :) i was kinda worried about throwin that in there lol but i thought it fit pretty well"
Posted by T-Nothing on "Untitled" by T-Nothing
- "I'm not offended, the Poe line seems like a nice touch, and adds to the mood of an already dark poem. I like it"
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Untitled" by T-Nothing
- "this read like a polemic... the evidence presented in one form of verse, the conclusion in another. Good questions, one and all. I like the adam-eve incest issue... and the Santa Clause reference; real conceptual problems for some. But one may still put forth what I consider a cop-out answer of sorts... that all the needless suffering and shit is really lessons... really part of a bigger plan that is all the better for the shit in the middle... haha, yeah, go figure. Nice write, impeccable rhyme with a lot of reason."
Posted by Unknown on "Your Father Who Art..." by T-Nothing
- "This was chock full of wise statements. Sounds like you have a very full concept of who you are and how you choose to progress through life. A very worthwhile read I thought. Thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "A few opinions (me-justified)" by T-Nothing
- "Love the contradiction, killing, healing ... making, breaking. Could be love, looks like a drug, but that is love as well now isn't it...
So consumed and that resonates through the who piece.
Very nice!
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Posted by unspeakable truth on ""Heavenly Hell"" by T-Nothing
- ""Say goodbye to the days of on going mysery that made you...somewhat... who you wanted to be." Man that line really reached out to me. I'm on my own road to letting go etc, and I think that was a very true statement for me for quite a while. Overall a well worthwhile read. Nicely done man."
Posted by Dilated View on "Say Goodbye" by T-Nothing
- "this was sensational...it sang to me from far away, then pulled me in. great write!...(and thank you for stopping by!)"
Posted by UnrequitedDream on "Say Goodbye" by T-Nothing
- "Amazing. You left your life behind, hoping for something better, but it ended up worse. I like how you explain that your mind was clouded up with feelings, and couldn't take it. Nice write."
Posted by maggot death on "Say Goodbye" by T-Nothing
- "Powerful emotions and internal struggle. This felt structured to be fast paced and edge of your seat and if that was your intention you pulled it off well. Nicely written."
Posted by Dilated View on ""Heavenly Hell"" by T-Nothing
- "Wow dripping with venom. The flow of this was great and the words showed the finger can point both ways. Looks like you are prepared to have the last laugh. Interesting read. Well crafted :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Personal venting" by T-Nothing
- "I like your words .:) Visionary and thought provoking .
I have one suggestion though I think it would flow better if it were in lines . evrything seems to run together . "
Posted by theXkevorkian on "A Bad Trip" by T-Nothing
- "Thanks, for taking me with you on the trip to your realization :) (There were a lot of spelling errors, but nothing that can't be fixed). Welcome to dp. "
Posted by Unknown on "A Bad Trip" by T-Nothing
