Comments by All Members
- "The visuals used here left me feeling like I was dreaming vivid chaos and, at the end, waking with a start. Each line strung me along as if against my will. Chaotically wonderful :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Newsom" by theXkevorkian
- "i thought at first this was about the state of affairs in our world today(lsd...i translated to mean 'lost salvation defined')i guess it's all in the reader's interpretation....for i still see it as such..we all seem to be spinning in a drug induced haze out of control. thanks for the thinker. "
Posted by natalie on "Tornado" by theXkevorkian
- "this hurt to read. so much blatant pain. seems so unbearable...how do we stand all this emotional turmoil? and why? made me think back to times when all i did was shy away from everyone and cry my pain away. no one ever believes you anyhow. hope things are better for you now. thanks for sharing your heart."
Posted by natalie on "A Letter ; So What" by theXkevorkian
- "'To many thoughts to be written on this page'
I can directly relate to this part...right now i have so many things going on that even if i were to write it in my journal or tell someone it wouldn't be enough..."
Posted by Unknown on "My Prison" by theXkevorkian
- "Thank You for your kind words.... Its all about the visual to me... I want you to see it smell it and feel it.... I hope I have accomplished this, at least in one of my pieces...."
Posted by theXkevorkian on "The Inaffectionate :" by theXkevorkian
- "I loved the colorful scene you painted with the help of realistic vivid imagery here. Your creativity and love for words inspire. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by tindomerel on "~Impossible Dreams~" by theXkevorkian
- "yup, well said, it is at times our plight as human to be disillusioned with life and what we've made of our personal space.but this is when we need to dig deeper into ourselves and find the hope and desire to try again, and again until we achieve some semblance of success; that something that makes us feel good about ourselves....good to be alive. :)"
Posted by natalie on "Human" by theXkevorkian
- ""Just lil something to make you think"
Just you managed to do so!
Funy and surprising lines :)
Pavel"
Posted by Unknown on "Science" by theXkevorkian
- "wow, really cool piece.... I thought about it like universes being membranes... maybe the same rules apply throughout... also brings to mind where human intelligence comes to a limit.. do we seek divine intervention.. I really like this suggestion of philosophy in science fiction."
Posted by Unknown on "Science" by theXkevorkian
- "such is life...sometimes the spinning makes you dizzy...that's always fun...I understand the withdrawal and need for escape from 'this astonishing dream'...sometimes feeling overwhelmed is preferable to being "underwhelmed."....haha...if that's even a word...at least you're still feeling...sometimes it feels like we're all just running around lost together...and don't even know what we're looking for...volumes have been written...but is anyone closer to the answer yet?..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Human" by theXkevorkian
- "loved this piece! can you help me make sense when you find out how to do it please?
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Posted by natalie on "I'm" by theXkevorkian
- "Like the way this work flows..The path of dreams is as a rule intricate..It's nice to hold on to somebody on the way."
Posted by tindomerel on "I'm" by theXkevorkian
- "brilliant...so am I...just trying to make sense of it...'pinned out ...laid down...and made up...wasted in the daydream'...to make the daydream the reality...maybe that's it..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "I'm" by theXkevorkian
- "If life is a daydream what happens when you wake up? I enjoyed this work"
Posted by Unknown on "I'm" by theXkevorkian
- "love the irony, the paradox of the end... so many visions of the city.... images of concrete, glass and asphalt... the light of the nightlife...... the bustle of traffic.... the myriad of signs.... nice write, man.... always cover the chicken in foil."
Posted by Unknown on "~Impossible Dreams~" by theXkevorkian
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