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- "I agree with Old SouL, and in that I notice that I seem to agree on the a development that is ongoing. Everytime I am away from your writing, I seem to come back to be impressed. This poem seem to play alot with my imagination. Tiger "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "My Liege ...{Ravenous}" by A Velvet Tongue
- "'...dance until dawn
a goddess...' Velvet Eighty-One!'garbed in demise
smiles in brilliance
the inevitable
now at hand...
she softly speaks
her words, paint your lobes
in lust...
"May I have this dance"?'
"
Posted by Unknown on "Disengadged....{sleep in rust}" by A Velvet Tongue
- "'your masquerade
feathers and pearls .......over at the stroke of twelve one second after
is where silence f a l l s ...' How perfect this would fit as a sensual grip in the weave of Venus Seventy-Nine...'the weak grovel at your feet The strong dance "
Posted by Unknown on "Disengadged....{sleep in rust}" by A Velvet Tongue
- "'disengadge ....
as you move through me
I welcome the flood
as I sail through ascension...' This is Poetic Opera at it's best, w/ a hint of Industrial Goth heavy & pure w/ composition & splendid orchestration!"
Posted by Unknown on "Disengadged....{sleep in rust}" by A Velvet Tongue
- "'...within your glorified shrine ...' so much as to why you deserve the grace of your poetic genius!'...laced in blue bloods...' beautiful imagery! from the beautiful Velvet Poet's mouth..."
Posted by Unknown on "Disengadged....{sleep in rust}" by A Velvet Tongue
- "A Featured Poet! again, as Ophelia, and both of you much well deserve the claim... a grace I have never been fortuned with: 'Tarred and feathered painted in rot...' the state of how this poet feels..."
Posted by Unknown on "Disengadged....{sleep in rust}" by A Velvet Tongue
- "It's like you got into my brain...and found that little bitty corner of it that no one knows about...shhh...don't tell nobody, but mmmm....yup, this was good...~Delilah~"
Posted by Delilah on "Rape Me" by A Velvet Tongue
- "Deep indeed. Vel, i love when you post work like this. Your erotica is amazing, but its works like this that keep my mind going. So many images, and sounds spill from these words. ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Disengadged....{sleep in rust}" by A Velvet Tongue
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