Comments by All Members
- "Amazing. You really show how, in the end, we can all be the things we despise...Just not everyone realizes it yet."
Posted by MikoAmaya on "Just Like ME" by jajang829
- "Thank you for all the great feedback! This work was a poetic narrative of a dream, mixed with some outside influence. It was a strangely free write. Not because of the content, but more because it allowed me to analyze my dream from the outside. Truly the most unique writing session I've ever had. The reaction and feedback from my readers is the icing on the cake. Thank you all!"
Posted by jajang829 on "Only Way Out" by jajang829
- "There are amazing, I love how you have the devotion to make a poem so long, that it takes two writes to finish."
Posted by Unknown on "Saved (pt. 2)" by jajang829
- "i have to agree with Ainsof on that ... DON'T FLUSH THE PILLS lol .. i mean come on we're here man .. and some of us are outta pills too lol ... thats a gr8 write my friend .. keep em comin ... thx for sharin :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Infected Blood" by jajang829
- "hey now... that's just crazy.... flushing the pills? Take it easy man... slow down, think about what you just wrote. you can't flush the pill. lol. well the nice thing about writing.. is it gives you someplace to put that pain. write on, man."
Posted by Unknown on "Infected Blood" by jajang829
- "Awe. Just pure awe. I loved every word. For who am I really? How do I view myself? Hmmm thoughts to ponder. "For you are Wonderful." That made me smile so big. I wasn't expecting that. But that was truly a perfect ending to a wonderful piece :) Thanks for the write Jajang!"
Posted by Rowan on "Wonderful" by jajang829
- "This was phenomenal. The self-questioning tone really brings across a humble, yet know-it-all vibe. I really enjoyed reading this. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Wonderful" by jajang829
- "I enjoyed this write. It has great questions asked. There's a reason we should pay attention to the past. It's so we learn from it and don't repeat it. "
Posted by Unknown on "Wonderful" by jajang829
- "without the pieces of the past that remain as reminders..we may be condemned to repeat the same mistakes...I enjoyed reading this..very introspective...and y'know, some of us really dig scars ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Wonderful" by jajang829
- "If I knew being nicer and forgiving woke up the conscience of folks as portrayed here, I may give up cynical...
I like how it makes one see narrator as guilty somehow...but still feel for them."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Bloody Knees" by jajang829
- "Very very dark indeed. Many different views of this. I agree with Rowen, this is one to come back to as after reading it now I feel as troubled as the man with the gun. I have not reached the clarity he has. I don't want him to hand her the gun. You leave the option for the reader to write their own ending. What a great piece."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Only Way Out" by jajang829
- "This shows a lot of emotion and leaves me wondering the story behind it. Like it is only a small sum of a huge equation. And I read it over and over looking for an answer."
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Tear Me Down" by jajang829
- "The words seeped into my mind to take me on a runaway train of thoughts. The "freedom" you acquired in the first staza didn't appear to be what it was. As I read every line, you made me feel what you felt. I felt trapped, unsure, roaming down cornered paths and blocked crossroads. I couldn't escape, but then there was the gun, a promise to be free of all the torment. However, the dilema. "To be or not to be?" the assassin or the suicide? You put great emphasis on this part. To be free from your lover's reign and end their life? Or to be free eternally and end yours? The ending took me by surprise I must say. You called your lover both those things for in reality she was the one leading you to destruction therefore killing you, the suicide. Hmmm so many thoughts I have for this piece. I may have to come back and comment again another time. There are so many ways to look at it. Very nice job. Not many pieces make me think as hard this."
Posted by Rowan on "Only Way Out" by jajang829
- "Numb pain, but does it really go away? Or is it a temporary relief that will only come back in time? Nice write jajang. I enjoyed this :) My mom has to take her "happy pills" as well."
Posted by Rowan on "Thorazine" by jajang829
- "the solace of the numb. of blocking, not thinking. being normal.blank but hey, it is very successful. nice piece"
Posted by RubyXero on "Thorazine" by jajang829
- "gimme the thorazine.... you don't need the thorazine, for what for what?... ministry, just one fix. at the height of despair... upon what will we cling... if we are not avidly seeking to let go. nice write man, felt the empty here."
Posted by Unknown on "Thorazine" by jajang829
- "I understood this completely. And although repulsed by the vision your words painted for me, I realize people are the same. And our shells hide deep inside what some would NEVER suspect. But some do have a different fiber in the ability to make the nonviolent choice when evil presents itself at our door. I have known first hand someone who didn't turn evil away. I am tormented wondering how/why they invite that guest into their home. This piece makes me anxious. Your ability to leave one with aftermath from reading your work is commendable. "
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Just Like ME" by jajang829
- "Excellent piece. Completely fulfilling read. And although I agree we have to learn to forgive ourselves...I believe pain comes from the fact there is still someone in our lives we haven't forgiven and healing won't be felt until we are able to do that. For some of us...there will never be healing. And so I join you with bloody knees. "
Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Bloody Knees" by jajang829
- "*Reaches out a hand to jajang829*...Hang in there mate...your not falling down there..we've got you..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Bloody Knees" by jajang829
- "We can never truly forgive until we learn to forgive ourselves. Such a nice, elegant, TRUE, write. We hate ourselves for the misdeeds we've committed. Not only that, but in turn begin to hate ourselves what we have wronged. We are at our own judgement. The worse of anyone. This was a lovely write and flowed very well. Write on."
Posted by Rowan on "Bloody Knees" by jajang829
- "Very powerful words. Yet, even if you said nothing at all, I would still be captivated. Your word choice is excellent - everything is phrased wonderfully. And such a fitting title too. I think this is just vague enough for anyone to get their own understanding from it, yet specific enough to really feel your emotions. Nice write."
Posted by wilted on "Bloody Knees" by jajang829
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