Comments by All Members
- "Man this just dripped with bitterness. The words you used to describe these emotions flowed together really well to pain this picture and I really enjoyed the concept flow from stanza/line to stanza/line. That last stanza just a knife in the front. No one wants to feel like an afterthought, but feeling like an afterthought as a result your elegy not arriving yet? That is heartbreaking but..., been there did that, am sure I am not the only one and somehow life went on. Take a couple sips of encouragement but in the meanwhile thank you much for sharing, this was a really interesting read."
Posted by Dilated View on "Funeral Dirge" by DescendingDown
- "how we find something redemptive in the ripping apart i'll never know....but you seem to take anything that aches and makes it ache prettily."
Posted by Unknown on "The Ossuary" by DescendingDown
- "I love this... the middle stanzas, the heart if you will, of the poem especially. Reads like burning flowers. "a burning lilac breath" -- gorgeous, hushed beauty."
Posted by Unknown on "A Mute Requiem For Vanity" by DescendingDown
- "i think ms. circe and i are finding a new beauty over and over in your words. . .. . so very glad i found these writes todae; of all daes. .. . they rest easy in me. thank you~"
Posted by Unknown on "Ephemeral Energy" by DescendingDown
- "arghhh..another last line that ensnares and repairs all the hurt i feel; the things. . .. unsaid..the things you know you hear from his/her heart/mind/soul/beyond. . .. those imperative little words that are still so unsure that we cant bare to utter them aloud; too fragile those words...too fragile our selves. .. . ."
Posted by Unknown on "Lilyflower.ed" by DescendingDown
- ".the last line. .. i am not sure why that impales me, but i feel it right through me... something that we dare not utter to our hearts, let alone to our loves. .. .. as if we could just have the time we needed the end might not be so killing.. .. . . .a lingering death i s'pose....but it would be beautiful wouldnt it?"
Posted by Unknown on "Alchemy Of Ruins" by DescendingDown
- "it's the stand alone line of 'ghosts' that haunts me; the resonance of something not-quite-regret and mingled misery......feels like more than loss. more like abruptly abandoned."
Posted by Unknown on "A Mute Requiem For Vanity" by DescendingDown
- "gosh, this tore me apart inside.... "screaming paralytic".. i've known this.. all that's felt in the breaking of a heart.... this is just too tragic, and you're so beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "A Mute Requiem For Vanity" by DescendingDown
- "This was really moving...... and oh so subtly it slipped under my heart's defenses and made me feel, something I usually hate to do. Thank you for writing something I too felt.... I could never express it with such skill"
Posted by Unknown on "A Mute Requiem For Vanity" by DescendingDown
- "again; the simple metaphor of falling and love. . and the woes and wiles; the addictiveness and the astral chaos that ensues; you have a way with enigmatic little touches....."
Posted by Unknown on "Fish Hook Smile" by DescendingDown
- "I have been reading your poems and I feel there is a good depth to your writings. It appears you are willing to give of yourself and there is also a warmth to what you write, I like what you write.
don't forget it's alright to be a little selfish
sometimes."
Posted by alex herewane on "Alchemy Of Ruins" by DescendingDown
- "oh this ache is so crippling.... how can a hurt feel so lovely at the same time? your memories are beautiful....."
Posted by Unknown on "Lilyflower.ed" by DescendingDown
- "lots of great phrases here. "horizon-less mo(u)rning", "ocean of vintage frailties", painting dreamscapes of my tarnished heart." powerfull work, "i can still remembver all the things he NEVER said." its sucks when you give alot more of ureself to someone than they are willing to give to you.... maybe it just means it was never meant to be? maybe ther are just scared cause they feel it is meant to be? these are questions i struggle with......thanks for sharing"
Posted by deadmanshand on "Lilyflower.ed" by DescendingDown
- "Very serene, especially for an erotic piece. It doesn't make you feel uncomfortable or blush. Just calm, the calm you get while you're in the most perfect place you can be at the particular given moment. Sweet post. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "We Drank Of Stolen Moments" by DescendingDown
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