Fish Hook Smile

By DescendingDown

I break stars & night like the sky was falling

he's like a drug

withdrawals
& pitfalls

till I knelt there

screaming white &
.fractured.

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Copyright 2010 Kandice Bush
Published on Saturday, May 29, 2010.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: again; the simple metaphor of falling and love. . and the woes and wiles; the addictiveness and the astral chaos that ensues; you have a way with enigmatic little touches.....

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