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- "~blushes deeply~ I just write how I feel, and dont really care too much if it fits the standard for poetry. I was feeling very depressed and started writing, mid way I got angry at myself for downward spirialing and that is how the ending was spawned. I am glad that in my writings own odd way can help anyone though. be well"
Posted by tinkdarkchyld on "Alone But Not Lost" by tinkdarkchyld
- "while reading this there was a point about half way where someone slapped me in the face and told me who i was. thank you for reminding me that regardless of how much shit happens we can get through everything."
Posted by Nixx on "Alone But Not Lost" by tinkdarkchyld
- "One time on this bad acid trip the phone wouldn`t shut the hell up so i threw it out of the balcony.
Nice rant though. Didn`t personally get it. Maybe it`s that deep =)"
Posted by Wolk on "Ring .....Ring.....Please" by tinkdarkchyld
- "This made me think of a Godsmack tune..Serenity... couple typos here, hun, but I like the sentiment."
Posted by Unknown on "a Plea" by tinkdarkchyld
- "I enjoyed this one...the creepy atmosphere extolled - the "shadow men"; yeah, short but potent poem chock-loaded with Horror-themed imagery and nice wrod handling.....cool poem scenario :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the Shadow Men" by tinkdarkchyld
- "Loved it...the creator, mother of
spiritual meaning...oh my you truly
gave it life!
wonderful, wonderful!
last line brillant!
(I was kind of wishing that
you would have formatted this
with a touch more air..for your
lines are so lovely to enjoy
we wanted to pause upon and
sip them as fine wine.
ears/Seattle
very inspiring writing!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "the Loop of Life" by tinkdarkchyld
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