Comments by All Members

"I feel like each couple of lines zooms in on the picture closer each time until the true scene is revealed, very effective, really liked this"
Posted by Lylani on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence

"Very clever, I like writes like this because it is something that just moves through each word, easy, and seamless. Great write."
Posted by Mylissa on "Intellectual Fingers" by Soldier Of Silence

"Reminds me of the twilight zone for some reason. It was written with a twist of a sinister nature. I love it. You're really finding your flow here. Yes! "
Posted by Mylissa on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence

"I especially like the way you repeat the word "remember" all the time - that makes it really work. "
Posted by Any on "The Uncle I Never Knew" by Soldier Of Silence

""As you bleed out on the dusty floor Of the Puppet Master’s basement " I think that's the most hurtful of being part of the marionette in the dark, you don't even get taken care of. I really felt this poem. Was wonderful. Good write."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence

"can't help but think of Pino-killo (spanish accent required for intended effect). This read like it was a fun write, inspiring."
Posted by Unknown on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence

"*pulls strings to show a disheveled shark-toothy grin* interesting write..I enjoyed."
Posted by Unknown on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark" by Soldier Of Silence

"completely agree with saint,..and let us not forget the fingers are only as fiendish and clever as the mind that drives them,...very clever and entertaining,..well done fingers:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Intellectual Fingers" by Soldier Of Silence

"this is exactly as it says; intellectual. . .and felt....like braille and bulletholes. . .. "
Posted by Unknown on "Intellectual Fingers" by Soldier Of Silence

"This holds a quality I like above all else, originality, a "one of a kind" feeling. write on"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Intellectual Fingers" by Soldier Of Silence

"that last stanza was magnificent. also duly noted....succulent use of double entendre *winks*"
Posted by ebonyamore on "Intellectual Fingers" by Soldier Of Silence

"The wording in this was great and yes it was an interesting title that attracted me like the others :-)."
Posted by Ashteroth on "Pineapple Style Heart Grenade" by Soldier Of Silence

"you flatter me deeply...keep whispering, please."
Posted by Mylissa on "Pineapple Style Heart Grenade" by Soldier Of Silence

"That's an interesting observation. I'd love to take credit for it, but honestly it just worked out that way. Good eye! I'll try to keep 'em coming."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Pineapple Style Heart Grenade" by Soldier Of Silence

"not only was the title catchy, I couldn't help but notice once it opened that the shape of the text resembles a grenade. Very cool, whether done on purpose or not. Can't wait to read more."
Posted by Unknown on "Pineapple Style Heart Grenade" by Soldier Of Silence

"I'm glad my catchy title brought you back to me. Alluring words sent on the wings of an angel, whispering sweet nothings into your ear, charming your soul to follow the Pied Piper back home to my side."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Pineapple Style Heart Grenade" by Soldier Of Silence

"First, the title, brilliant! It caught my interest right away. I am not sure how to take this, but I had to log on and comment. I see it as you are inspired by poetry, someone's emotions ignited a passion even if it is not clear. this is absolutely perfect. My favorite part is "My pineapple style heart grenade Fragmenting into bloody pieces of corrective actions" everything seemed to flow beautifully. Well done. Keep them coming. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Pineapple Style Heart Grenade" by Soldier Of Silence

"*self -destruction, even!"
Posted by Unknown on "Me, Myself and Eye" by Soldier Of Silence

"damn. a pooling puddle of clotted,pissed out soul purge that screams madness from every direction."I tumble out of my ocular cavities and join myself" what a delightful thought!it would be like finally getting to meet the icky voices in my head.I quite enjoyed this sordid delf-destruction :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Me, Myself and Eye" by Soldier Of Silence

"I like this as well, very emotional. As I said before all your work is extremely raw. I love it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Collector of the Damned" by Soldier Of Silence

"The name soldier of silence is quite fitting for your poetry content. Yet it is something new to the table and I'm really liking it. Not to mention I love character profiles/psychological profiles and you seem to be quite good at doing both. Great write."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Collector of the Damned" by Soldier Of Silence

"Well it did spark a interest, and I am extremely flattered. It is lush and sexy, I enjoy this type of writing. I am assuming it is my writing that inspired this, which is a beautiful thing. Thank you for this. :} :} You get two smiling faces just for the content. Though on a side note, if I could find someone who makes me lose control I would be in heaven...an impossible task! :oP"
Posted by Mylissa on "Tongue-whipped" by Soldier Of Silence

"I hoped it would spark an interest in you. I had you in mind when I wrote it. Glad you enjoyed it."
Posted by Soldier Of Silence on "Tongue-whipped" by Soldier Of Silence

""I thrust deep inside I don’t need to be told" a man in control, there truly is nothing sexier. this is yummy. "
Posted by Mylissa on "Tongue-whipped" by Soldier Of Silence

"it's like me and my buddies say, bitches and hoes, bitches and hoes. lol. i've been there, and hopefully like me, you're better off for it, even if you don't know it yet."
Posted by MESUN on "Snowflake Eyes and A Charcoal Heart" by Soldier Of Silence

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