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Pineapple Style Heart Grenade
By Soldier Of Silence
You pull the pin with your inconsistencies
Starting the countdown to destroy words
Meaningful gestures and colorful language
Paint a dull picture and set off a chain reaction
Primed and poised for destructive improper grammar
Striking the booster in my emotions to detonate
My pineapple style heart grenade
Fragmenting into bloody pieces of corrective actions
Slaying your hollow lexicon
To stitch together comprehensible diction
Resurrecting your poetry from its ashes
Like the phoenix from its fiery grave
In vivid color and crystal clarity
High definition verbiage to cleanse the pallet
Of poets who appreciate
The superlative
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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Ashteroth
(190)
wrote:
The wording in this was great and yes it was an interesting title that attracted me like the others :-).
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A former member wrote:
not only was the title catchy, I couldn't help but notice once it opened that the shape of the text resembles a grenade. Very cool, whether done on purpose or not. Can't wait to read more.
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Soldier Of Silence
(42) wrote:
That's an interesting observation. I'd love to take credit for it, but honestly it just worked out that way. Good eye! I'll try to keep 'em coming.
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
First, the title, brilliant! It caught my interest right away. I am not sure how to take this, but I had to log on and comment. I see it as you are inspired by poetry, someone's emotions ignited a passion even if it is not clear. this is absolutely perfect. My favorite part is "My pineapple style heart grenade Fragmenting into bloody pieces of corrective actions" everything seemed to flow beautifully. Well done. Keep them coming.
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Soldier Of Silence
(42) wrote:
I'm glad my catchy title brought you back to me. Alluring words sent on the wings of an angel, whispering sweet nothings into your ear, charming your soul to follow the Pied Piper back home to my side.
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
you flatter me deeply...keep whispering, please.
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