Comments by All Members
- "Drugs.. If I had to choose to die from one I think I'd choose drugs.. Love is just to painful to die from. Sex, well who the hell wants a deadly std bc well then there will be no more sex.. Drugs, I mean if you gotta die from one, it seems like the best option.. anyways enough about my views on that subject lol.. Nice poem I liked it and well obviously it got me thinking. haha.. Good job :)"
Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "Love Sex & Drugs" by zhade and shanea
- "You are welcome, and i am glad that you have grown into a stronger woman. With all the pain I put you through...I am glad that I atleast did one good thing through it all, even if it had mi cry a few tyms in the end. Now as wi have parted I pay my respects to the woman of my dreams for many years...but like when things die. Wi just have to move on!"
Posted by zhade and shanea on "Thank You?...." by zhade and shanea
- "its strange hearing this from the male side but comforting at the same time, knowing it doesn't only effect the girls.. this was a fantastic write. great set up and emotion. the ending was a bit hard for me to read though."
Posted by Unknown on "Letter to my unborn baby!" by zhade and shanea
- "haa love the dialect..its a bit like when i first read trainspotting had to get to grips with teh language and once you get it youre reading on another level to the norm. love the lingo, some cool lines and amusing ending .. enjoyed "
Posted by Unknown on "ramble!" by zhade and shanea
- "Mon shanea Mi really need to be baCC in hawaii, Yuh really need mi protection again. I apologize that yuh mind was blinded by his physical appearance! Let mi find him!!"
Posted by zhade and shanea on "Breaking bones" by zhade and shanea
- "Never underestimate a women that is half your size.
i loved that line, because these days, the only thing that people do is undereestimate females when they really shouldnt."
Posted by Unknown on "Breaking bones" by zhade and shanea
- "I miss you guys. You should come around more. I like the way this one tells a story yet keeps us guessing. Excellent.--Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "Breaking bones" by zhade and shanea
- "How you doing man? Just a bit of advice, the best way to get noticed, and maybe get a little bit of feedback on your work, is to read and comment on other members post. People tend to return the favor :)"
Posted by Alanarchy on "hopeless actions" by zhade and shanea
- "Very passionate. This is an intense read. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that can't be fixed with a quick run through spell check. Nice job. Write on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "hopeless actions" by zhade and shanea
