... KIll me quickly
By zhade and shanea
Heartache
Heartache gravitates my mind!
Hovering it from my skull above my head so that I may see what I am thinking
This feels like a drama movie and I am the director
Planning every scene carefully and dictating how the lines should be spoken
Editing all things not just how the man feels in his heart or thoughts
that are being processed within his mind,
outside of the body
Body language is key all other things are pointless!
She spoke words that were not meant to be harmful but yet after I set myself
up for the blow... she quickly delivered
Deliverance from this gulliable mind and fragile corpse is what i would
pray for, if a god existed
Reaching my point of negligiance and disownage for myself
I will start and remain in third person!
Comments on "... KIll me quickly"
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On Thursday, February 26, 2009, zhade and shanea
(14) wrote:
thank you all for the comments.
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, whisperer
(166) wrote:
poignant and powerful if short, raw and rampant searing of brain and empathetic notions...i want to see more
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, Joey
(30) wrote:
O_O liiikkkeee it aalot.