... KIll me quickly

By zhade and shanea

Heartache
Heartache gravitates my mind!
Hovering it from my skull above my head so that I may see what I am thinking
This feels like a drama movie and I am the director
Planning every scene carefully and dictating how the lines should be spoken
Editing all things not just how the man feels in his heart or thoughts that are being processed within his mind,
outside of the body
Body language is key all other things are pointless!
She spoke words that were not meant to be harmful but yet after I set myself up for the blow... she quickly delivered
Deliverance from this gulliable mind and fragile corpse is what i would pray for, if a god existed
Reaching my point of negligiance and disownage for myself
I will start and remain in third person!

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© 2009 zhade
Published on Wednesday, February 25, 2009.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Journal"
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  • zhade and shanea On Thursday, February 26, 2009, zhade and shanea (14)By person wrote:

    thank you all for the comments.

  • whisperer On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    poignant and powerful if short, raw and rampant searing of brain and empathetic notions...i want to see more

  • Joey On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, Joey (30)By person wrote:

    O_O liiikkkeee it aalot.

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