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  • "5 years is quite an achievement, well done! Likewise I took meds for a few yrs to get over the inertia I guess you could say but then it is all me the rest of the way, including change of diet, regular exercise and even aquiring more uplifting music to get me through. You strike me as a strong lady (which of course does not exempt you from having a tender heart or vunerablities by any means) so no doubt you will be one the people to take it by the horns. The first step for some is making the choice not to be beaten. You're right too, the outside world can contribute and entice us but it can't make us act angry or adopt the attitude of failure. We do that. Not saying it isn't hard at times either. Thank you muchly for the comment. ~Ash "
    Posted by Ashteroth on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "Depression is a disease that robs ones ability to desire something better for him/herself. To fight against it is to do the undoable, to commit the un~commitable, to survive something whose purpose is to keep one from wanting to do so. I've been clean five years now, so to speak, and though certain meds did help it was me getting up and moving forward that caused the greatest change. It was the refusal to look away from the parts of ME that could be changed as opposed to blaming the world for causing my depression. Absolutely right. Hails."
    Posted by Unknown on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "This is a very vivid song it was playing clearly in my head as i read on and on ....good stuff"
    Posted by Unknown on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • ":) I've decided to tone down my mocking tongue and it's true... to love and be loved is a core desire of most beings if not all just in some it turns in on itself and becomes resent. But I value all lives and do believe ALL life is a family that should by rights stand by one another. Thank you for your comment. (Also the name is a male demon and a female Goddess depending on which religion you speak from) ~Ash"
    Posted by Ashteroth on "Collective conscious" by Ashteroth
  • "Happiness is for the Dark of us, like everyone else. No matter what one believes it is happiness we all seek, Love we yearn for, no matter how blasphemous and black we are. The name of a demon with the words of a sage. :) Cheers."
    Posted by Unknown on "Collective conscious" by Ashteroth
  • "Thanks angel, I was unsure about this piece when I wrote it cuz its not my usual style but glad it made you smile :) ~Ash"
    Posted by Ashteroth on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
  • "this is beautiful, made me smile the whole way through.. wow.. well done, i need to read some more of you, (: "
    Posted by Star on "Sweet dreams" by Ashteroth
  • "Music is but medication for the crying soul and I heard clearly your song while reading this. Nicely versed and well scripted. Thanx for caring to share =}"
    Posted by Unknown on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "Yeah, thats what I'm thinking and I don't want to be the cause of others feeling more depressed so I think if when I touch on the negative I'm gonna put something hopeful and uplifting in too. Yeah I kinda had a beat to go so they fit a certain way. ~Ash"
    Posted by Ashteroth on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "I like the positive theme...it's something I've thought quite a bit about and tried to put into practice...I'm concerned that wallowing in negativity and talking about it and expressing it and noticing it in others and writing about it constantly just brings more of the same...they say misery loves company... well it also likes to breed and fester and infect everything around it too...I'm sure it would make a cool song...do you have a beat or melody line yet to fit it into?...otherwise I'm sure the lyrics could be tweaked if needed ... thanks :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "awesome, yeah I'm trying to aim for more uplifting pieces nowadays. It's a new outlook but really want to encourage others in future. Thanks for the comment :) ~Ash"
    Posted by Ashteroth on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "I found this very refreshing. I think it's harder to write an uplifting poem like this, than to delve into depressing territory, so I can appreciate the effort and thought behind this piece."
    Posted by Patches on "Gotta get up" by Ashteroth
  • "Thank you kindly kinkifrog, I have definitely had a change in attitude over last year or so... def can be a hard road. Peace ~Ash"
    Posted by Ashteroth on "back to sleep" by Ashteroth
  • "it's a difficult thing to remain in the light and requires a certain amount of diligence to maintain the positive attitude ( I have found ) ... such a positive and uplifting piece for these parts... ~ blessings ~"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "back to sleep" by Ashteroth
  • "Indeed but like the majority of stuff I write it depends n ur hearts intention as to how u read it... To kind ppl it is a sincere act of friendship to nasty ppl, they may read it as a situation when someone plays the violin in mock sympathy and my reply is "Now you can go fly a kite bud" :) There are a few lines in this song with that style of ambiguity. I'm sure the person I wrote it for will read the good in it though :D ~Ash"
    Posted by Ashteroth on "I've got a pitch... hope you have a ball !!!" by Ashteroth
  • "Wow Ash ,nice work . it seems no matter how old you get and the more you learn , we all tend to do the same repetitive shit , hopefully soon ,there will come a change . life and its choices , no instruction manual . mmm , your write was inspiring and thought provoking :) thanks !"
    Posted by Unknown on "Reality check" by Ashteroth
  • "Wow, I am flattered that my work has inspired you to write a gem such as this. Very impressed with this. I will have to come back to this and read it again before I can make a more thoughtful comment. But again, thank you for this."
    Posted by ALBATROSS on "I've got a pitch... hope you have a ball !!!" by Ashteroth
  • "good reality check, words to revisit... to inspire progress... aim for the middle ground... sounds like Aristotle's 'mean' or Epicurus' search for tranquility and balance.... I always tell people... when the occasion arises, that if they are not satisfied with their lives, then each day they should be working out a plan to change em... ya know.... like the question, what have you done today to make your tomorrow better than today?.... something to think about.... good reality check, definitely words to live by here. be well!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Reality check" by Ashteroth
  • "I'm OCD with a touch of depression, so forgetting my medication is a major step downwards. I can easily relate to this piece. A good write, it flows well. Edge"
    Posted by Edgewalker on "One of those daze" by Ashteroth
  • "feel like i wee caught on cctv,.... im such a scatter-brain i near forgot to comment,.... a day in the life... -wicked job mate."
    Posted by Unknown on "One of those daze" by Ashteroth
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