Comments by All Members
- "what a captivating piece, i loved every line. i was quickly submerged within the imagery, beautiful to say the least, bravo friend, one of my favorites"
Posted by A Life Without You on "The Path Away" by Scarrzz
- "this is how i feel walking down the street in autumn. cold and wind blown. empty and dusty but, I relish the mutual feeling for the cold. I know it feels the same despair it feels as I press into it. ~moony"
Posted by Unknown on "The Path Away" by Scarrzz
- "Yeah, I've read they bring us these because they think we're such poor hunters & the are trying to "help out." *grin* I need all the help I can get."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Tiger's Stripe" by Scarrzz
- "having cats I have seen this a time or two... well done, a fine feline piece... now if only they wouldn't leave the dead bird on the door mat as a present... write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Tiger's Stripe" by Scarrzz
- "Fucking Martians getting in your head haha..love the paranoia in here..so weird you are..but the close..that was worth the venture outer space ..to become a star..scarzz in the sky..shiningmbright..lol"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Riddled with Paranoia" by Scarrzz
- "hmmm...this reminded me of 'one fine day in the middle of the night , two dead men got up to fight'...aww...now you remind me of my Grandad...[not]...this was much enjoyed...lol"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Riddled with Paranoia" by Scarrzz
- "Ahh, that was great! I thoroughly enjoyed how you told an actual story in poem form...and especially enjoyed that it was about alien abduction. The only thing that made me a little dissapointed was that I wanted to keep reading after it was over!"
Posted by mindsurfer on "Riddled with Paranoia" by Scarrzz
- "a pool of flowing red. reminds me of the end of the book the great gatsby. such a sad thought sewn into those lines and crawling out among these. the feeling is the same, the ones you want always leave before youve ever thought to say goodbye..~moony (sigh)"
Posted by Unknown on "Blood and Water" by Scarrzz
- "Absolutely great work..I enjoyed finding the images in this storming piece..the structure and stitching was done well..great use of personification..to see the storm of this girls life..searching to understand her position..reason..and you being the ultimate figure...at the aid of her death..sad outcome..very moving wording too.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Blood and Water" by Scarrzz
- "wow, I like this piece... I have one suggestion, loose one of the if onlys.... well done here, thanks for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "If Only" by Scarrzz
- "Awesome comments, everyone. I am humbled to the maximum allowable degree."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- ". Scarzz..you get a gold Star.. and you win a new Car... Congrats on the minimalist win man..this was well deserves as it was a great entry..as you can see by my comment above.it can be so limiting..but you pulled it off so well..great flow on the meter with such few words.. Cheers.. And to answer the question about viewing others' entries..click on the black "Winner box above" and it will take you to the entry rules..at the bottom you will find the other entrants pieces..Later"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "Deep...dark...disconsolate and dim...congratulations on your minimalist win!"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "In the darkness that shrouds..when the ink has spilled..over oil filled streets..my hearts beats..I pick up the quill..
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Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "Yeah it's been awhile since I've posted anything new. I've been away in Puerto Rico. I'm coming back though!"
Posted by Rowan on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "Thanks, Rowan. I'm glad you liked it. I haven't seen you about for a while, I think it's time I checked out your new writes since I saw you last. "
Posted by Scarrzz on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "Wow, I'm quite pleased, He Who Shall Not Bleed. I accept your honor with many thanks.
It was an interesting contest. I was wanting to read the other entries. Is there a place where they're all listed? Maybe a forum post with links?
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Posted by Scarrzz on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "That was a great write for so few words. It only proves that a lot can be said whether it be a book or a sentence. Brilliant write."
Posted by Rowan on "Dystopia" by Scarrzz
- "Freedom isn't free, and I have nothing less that the utmost respect for those who have dedicated their lives to this great country of ours. Thanks for posting."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Liberty's Price" by Scarrzz
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