Comments by All Members
- "so this was the original, unfucked over... what a turn of events? I'm practically thrilled that I read the latter before the first, just because of the fade back to... safety?"
Posted by Sketso on "Just another Love Poem" by freudian-slip
- "I can almost imagine you delivering this in person, quivering unhidden rage in the voice, a bit of spittle and foam at the corners of your mouth, and a wild look in your eyes... no hidden meanings to dig out here, this was raw, passionate, powerful!"
Posted by Sketso on "Just another Love Poem- Fucked Over" by freudian-slip
- "wow... "don't look so sad just because I'm not the same" - the line in the middle that defines the whole write, at least, to my reading eyes..."
Posted by Sketso on "Erotodaze" by freudian-slip
- "There's no one really quite like you,...it was written in such poetic speak that i were done in a few seconds,...i had to go back again, ..i felt ya tone and saw the tweak in ya brow..kick'n ass you are."
Posted by Unknown on "Just another Love Poem- Fucked Over" by freudian-slip
- "i like how this turned out to be a nice tribute to your dad instead of those "i hate my parents" sort of poems. i love my dad too and he taught me everything i know right now. this was one amazing write."
Posted by NeroMatches on "thinking of Sinatra" by freudian-slip
- "Reading your works has shown me how well you grasp your emotions as individual petitions...eg: i get the impression your love would be rivaled only in fairytale,..adapting the same solid tenacity if that emotion happen to be hate or despair,...what ever it may be ...you have it covered,...a knowing of ones self is not as common as one may think, ..but i get the impression; right now your taken names and kick'n arse. "
Posted by Unknown on "To Love him is to know Him" by freudian-slip
- "yes I concur with S/C...a powerful poem with precise statements and thoughts...this echoed the style of the previous one I read today and its sparse but compact words really seeped through and left an impression on me. You're in fine form....don't stop :D"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Calypso" by freudian-slip
- "What a powerful poem. (crimes committed somehow lost their guilt) These lines really make you reflect. Great write "
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Calypso" by freudian-slip
- "wry and high and dry! I love the opening line and it's as though playing tit for tat(?). Test of the poem doesn't disappoint but if anything I'd say it was too short, as just as you got my juices going you sorta stopped. Still I suppose you made your point with precision. Cutting and caustic(you finger wagging whore! Joke!! :P). I liked it. A lot. Trade?"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Camel Toe and what he lost..." by freudian-slip
- "That confused me to all heck, yet it didnt much matter...within my misunderstanding came whispers and shades of grey matter,.. i am curious though: to know whether there was any indication of 'someone'.. not knowing a good thing when it was in-front of them? "
Posted by Unknown on "Camel Toe and what he lost..." by freudian-slip
- "shit you paint a clear picture,..an entire poem in metaphorical form yet i were able 2 read as if it were in laymen's terms,...that my dear is a true gift of talent...xcellent write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Timeshare" by freudian-slip
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