Comments by All Members
- "this one broke my heart. i had so many times pictured a perfect peace dancing in the forest...but with all that false accusations. hmph. so sad. beautiful piece tho. i'm still sad from it...:("
Posted by RubyXero on "She Was Heaven's Envy..." by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "Your first poem? I'm never going to write one this amazing... I felt it so much, and it touched me when it came full-circle at the end there I felt its power. This is your second poem in a row I'm adding to the fave list, stop taking all my space :P"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "She Was Heaven's Envy..." by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "ouch, incisively effective.. my only suggestion, change pious to piety, I think that is the correct usage. Oh, and pety is petty*. oop. Well played, welcome to DP. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Serpents to Snakes" by Kaleidoscope_Heart