Comments by All Members
- "This piece unnerved me to the point i couldn't take my eyes away! you know how to capture the readers attention!"
Posted by JadedHeart on "Serial" by chrome arctic
- "this is a place I find myself in sometimes...too deep to even see a chink of light...beyond hope and beyond a miracle...I don't want to be there either...well written piece...I hear you..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Below Deep" by chrome arctic
- "very good word usage....I especially liked "burn my dreaming", many would have used burn my DREAMS instead...but I like your usage much better, it changes the entire meaning.:)Snake "
Posted by snakeskingrin on "Low Light " by chrome arctic
- "This is terrific! It had me in the chest for a minute, now it's got me in the stomach. I'm going to read it once more, Great work. Just awesome. Keep it up."
Posted by Unknown on "Low Light " by chrome arctic
- "Nothing in life is ever certain, except the certainty that someone will take you for granted at some point in life."
Posted by Unknown on "end of an era" by chrome arctic
- ""you are what i've dreamt of"
"now you're real, and i feel sick". ...Oh, wow. Those lines pretty much summarize my sentiments on love, at this moment. I wish I could have said it myself. This is just remarkable...like a cold steel blade to the senses. Wow wow wow."
Posted by Unknown on "life in a colorless material" by chrome arctic
- "wow. this was absolutely amazing. i loved the line "Reverting to obscure ways
They’re tearing the wires from their wrists "...that stuck to me. very strong piece. description...imagery. personification...wonderful. i loved it."
Posted by RubyXero on "The Electrical Dawn" by chrome arctic
- "That first stanza is amazing. You have a good lead in writing, if that makes sense. each of your lines flow well into the next. The first stanza is a prime example of this. Cheers dude."
Posted by Unknown on "Sister Rain [punch up]" by chrome arctic
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