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Low Light
By chrome arctic
Mark me
Hurt me
Force alive through me
I'll crawl for you
If you need
Burn my,
Breathing
Disprove my thoughts
Keep me under
Your control
Rip me
Tear me
Pull me to pieces
I'm not worth,
The forgiveness
Judge me
Fail me
Scratch 'god' out of me
My existence
Fades without you
My light
My reasons
A stranger's secret
I need no north
But your rule
Curse me
Leave Me
Dead obsessions
I'll breathe to crack
For your smile
You are
My bleach
My need for crashing
Push this away
While you laugh
Watch me
Fall down
Grinning at faith torn
Be sure I know
That I'm wrong
Razor
Trace me
Freshen old scars
Burn my dreaming
In your flame
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© 2008 chrome arctic
Published on Saturday, June 28, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, June 28, 2008, snakeskingrin
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wrote:
very good word usage....I especially liked "burn my dreaming", many would have used burn my DREAMS instead...but I like your usage much better, it changes the entire meaning.:)Snake
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A former member wrote:
absolutley wonderfull!! ~ hdb.
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A former member wrote:
This is terrific! It had me in the chest for a minute, now it's got me in the stomach. I'm going to read it once more, Great work. Just awesome. Keep it up.
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