Comments by All Members
- "a lot of beautiful imagery, strong lines in here "pretending angels didnt fall" "spinning innocence like spiders web" i have enjoyed this. . . "
Posted by GraveFlower on "Art.trocity" by Rebel tiGer King
- "I'm glad I stopped by DP today, though I've read these words before via text, they lose something without the structure. There is always something romantic and winesome about your writting...although the title is more explicit in suggestion...what more could you ask for than a melding of mind, body, and soul. you are lovely ~k"
Posted by Sin on "Ménage à trois" by Rebel tiGer King
- "I like the way you entwine the language... the barrier that is torn off like clothes... well crafted there... the last line seemed to be a bit of a shot to me, not sure I read it as intended, but it seemed to suggest the other didn't bring 'her' mind... as if the language barrier was only torn off in clothes... but not intellectually, maybe... nice turn there. thanks, man."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Ménage à trois" by Rebel tiGer King
- "firstly, congrats on poem of the day!
welcome to dp. :)
and i enjoyed your poem, but there were quite a few spelling errors throughout that made it a little hard as i had to slow it down and correct them mentally. (spellcheck can help you when you go to edit...click on abc and it will help you)"
Posted by natalie on "The nudity of you, woman" by Rebel tiGer King
- ""Bleeding out the hour glass
A meaningful existence" Nice one ;) Really like it~ Velo.city and Art.trocity~ Both very good poems indeed. Ten from me ;) "
Posted by Symbol on "Art.trocity" by Rebel tiGer King
- "Dalliances with death...I like how that sounds. Now onto the poem...a great poem inspired by another great poem. This is why I love effortless art. "Playing with the broken divine" that line stood out to me. Great metaphors throughout."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "Art.trocity" by Rebel tiGer King
- "and another god dies.... may this death not be cross? nice imagery, make believe, godlike, dalliances with death... all familiar but never grow old--like gods, maybe ;) good to see ya posting again. *existence*... *innocence* :) just thought I'd help on some typos. all the best, hombre."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Art.trocity" by Rebel tiGer King
- "Wonderfully wrought and yes, how the mighty have fallen, or rather just coming to the understanding of our very destructible existences that once seemed otherwise, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Art.trocity" by Rebel tiGer King
- "Wow, psychedelic in nature I love this type of genre such a free verse just ride the flow, yet depth...again its been a ride into your deepness...we keep's on!"
Posted by Unknown on "Art.trocity" by Rebel tiGer King
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