Comments by All Members
- "It's difficult to come up with words to describe this. What I will say is this was spun magnificent..A write that reveals true talent. Very well done, indeed =) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "50%" by past tense
- "Wow...I loved this one! The imagery of "These words
slip
twisted
through the gutter" and weeping into a sewage grate so "my tears will find the ocean" were especially great bits of imagery for me. Very, very cool! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "50%" by past tense
- "This just seemed to curl inside my soul. wow....Sorry for the lack of a better comment."
Posted by Narcissa on "50%" by past tense
- ""self explanatory insomnia" you have a raw way with images and voodoo doll words. ..pinpricks of emotion. ... egads; some good stuff. welcome to DP. ness"
Posted by Unknown on "pillow.case canvas" by past tense
- "There's so much here...each image is double, triple laced with meanings, denotative, connotative, historical, allegorical, personal...it's almost too rich to relate to on the level of dysfunction..."
Posted by Unknown on "dysfunction: a self portrait" by past tense
- "Didn't expect the ending, but it was an amazing ending so it was well taken. "Bottles missing the message" really loved that line, mind you there were some other great parts but good job! *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "pillow.case canvas" by past tense
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