casting wishes on molten stars [never did us any good]
By past tense
beautiful
never crashed so.
hard.
As it did when
every star lost its grip
on reality
and dripped to
ignite the soil.
and the broken glass
lit fire to strings
of reason. built like
constellations.
timid. and the songs
about truth
broke the silence.
I can remember those
nights--my silhouette
dancing
without me. you.
pausing time to show me
each second in
painstaking
detail.
then you would break clocks.
second hand faults
and a bottom lip like
redemption.
I was too scared
to stop.
that beautiful
des.truc.tion
calling us
its own.
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© 2008 spitting ink
Published on Tuesday, February 26, 2008.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
you are intense to read....but like a drug...always leaving me wanting more...but have to pace myself.....*tips hat*....****....-rc/\ol
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On Saturday, May 12, 2012, OLd SouL
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I want to echo Carmina's comment. I was m.i.a. from this place while you were here. I'm glad you popped up and I'm eager for something new? You've got the gift.
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On Saturday, May 12, 2012, Carmina Gitana
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This is . . . phenomenal. I really don't want to quote lines or critique it intelligently. It's just really, really fucking good, and I am simply glad to have found your work here.
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, Spiritus_Frumenti
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That third stanza really did it for me. This entire piece was glowing with inspiration. nicely done. - l -
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A former member wrote:
"I can remember those nights--my silhouette dancing without me." Painstakingly gorgeous. This left soulprints.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, SGT Bloth
(162) wrote:
Wow..Impressive symbolism...I like very much. Bloth