Comments by All Members
- "wow....i really, really love this...its beautiful and i can definitely relate..* Amazing Write*"
Posted by Exodus on "Echo" by dark_sister
- "You are definitely one of my favorites on DP and this a perfect example of why: fantastic, dark visuals and metaphors. Never contrived or cliché. Always fresh and innovative. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Stranger on "Dowager Queen" by dark_sister
- "deriving a fortold happines from a dark blessing.........your words lay into eachother like a mother holds a child........when you speak......it is hard not to listen.....urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Heaven, Maybe" by dark_sister
- "I'm glad to see you choose New Orleans as a theme ... a truly magical place. Your poem reflects the city's elements and energies in a very authentic way - well done!"
Posted by Sister_Morphine on "New Orleans" by dark_sister
- ""Pull me softly and dream me away, wind.
I'm getting hard and cracked,
like pavement, and dull as gray, too." Lovely lines in a lovely piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Deep Sight" by dark_sister
- "dusty and travel worn quiet and hiding inside ready to run run run into a sunset that doesn't particularly put the movie show cliche in mind... always a pleasure"
Posted by Jonas on "Banishing" by dark_sister
- "Nice! I love the lines "back to the family
that chewed and chewed
until you emerged
full of holes
and too eager" - great mental picture from that! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Banishing" by dark_sister
- ""life is not like that at all" i keep reading, and keep tasting new words that are so alive. great job."
Posted by Unknown on "Seriously" by dark_sister
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