Comments by All Members
- "god that was a stupid comment. the bradburry part: ok... the message shit: i'm sorry. this upon re-reading speaks to me of the rot of apathy a the depths of descent the spirit is capable of"
Posted by Jonas on "Rotten in Denmark" by dark_sister
- "it's been a while since i've been around your work... a while since you've posted even... i am always amazed at your ability to capture a feeling..."
Posted by Jonas on "Rapunzel" by dark_sister
- "i dont think the word 'bubble' does much for the intensity that poetry was meant to hold..but this was pretty ok."
Posted by Twilight on "I Love Laughter" by dark_sister
- "a sense, like bradburry... something wicked this way comes... wont deny that i can't make heads or tails of a 'message' ... but i can see the slink and smell the stink on the crisp wind..."
Posted by Jonas on "Rotten in Denmark" by dark_sister
- "Oo... I smell a new poet in our midst. Snatch away, I say, and give that little punk what's coming to her - her and her mother, both! And while you may rot, there is something which blooms within your poem... perhaps it's time to read more."
Posted by stormtalk on "Rotten in Denmark" by dark_sister
- "this would make a lovely song... it's dark, and almost... i want to say wicked, but not really. it's the smile a girl gives when she knows she has the control after all... and she'll use it."
Posted by KittyStryker on "Darken my Doorway" by dark_sister
- "I love the way you wield words, you are a true goddess of poetry. I can*t believe I am the first to commend you on this masterpiece, well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Elegy" by dark_sister
- "This is like an ancient tale...that long lives....this was really amazing....i could see the images being played out in my mind...Great write!"
Posted by Exodus on "Brotherless Mother" by dark_sister
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