Rotten in Denmark

By dark_sister

I smell something rotten in Denmark,
a sour hint of worms to come.
I am so sharp and ready,
so clever and so true.
I dream every day of her dying,
the poison-tongued beast.
I dream every day of snatching her daughter,
and taking her to my fearful tower,
where I will teach her sweet songs to sing,
and she will bloom in kindness.

I smell something wrong and rotting.
I creep along the scent to its source.
Behind walls and echoes hides the crime,
my claws will bring it to daylight.

I am as wicked as they come.


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Copyright 2004 dark_sister
Published on Friday, February 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, November 1, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Love this! W.S. never fails to provide inspiration, does he? : ) Miss seeing new pieces from you...such a lovely mind you have. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • swing_the_hammer On Thursday, April 28, 2005, swing_the_hammer (48)By person wrote:

    the quiet goddess- where has she gone?

  • Jonas On Monday, February 16, 2004, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    a sense, like bradburry... something wicked this way comes... wont deny that i can't make heads or tails of a 'message' ... but i can see the slink and smell the stink on the crisp wind...

  • Jonas On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    god that was a stupid comment. the bradburry part: ok... the message shit: i'm sorry. this upon re-reading speaks to me of the rot of apathy a the depths of descent the spirit is capable of

  • A former member wrote: enticing...

  • Dancing_Monkey On Friday, February 13, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    I'm from denmark... damn!

  • stormtalk On Friday, February 13, 2004, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    Oo... I smell a new poet in our midst. Snatch away, I say, and give that little punk what's coming to her - her and her mother, both! And while you may rot, there is something which blooms within your poem... perhaps it's time to read more.

  • Jonas On Monday, February 16, 2004, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    hahaha! new poet?! she's been blowing my mind since 'fore i heard your name ;-)

  • Six-Out On Friday, February 13, 2004, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    dark_sister....new? Dude, where the hell have you been. She's like a silent franchise.

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