Comments by All Members
- "quite romantical and sensual, like not much cotton on, cuddling under a comforter while the rain pounds on an aluminum roof"
Posted by Jonas on "Put This Away" by dark_sister
- "you've such an amazing handle on your words and the tone and flow of all of your pieces. another excellent addition to your cache... and 'cellar door' always catches my attention... various reasons... you caught the right vibe for the title"
Posted by Jonas on "Cellar Door" by dark_sister
- ""drenched in nonsense but occassionally
wrenching eyes wide open
with painful stabs of truth." - excellent! I wondered how Delphi related to until I got to those lines - very nice! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Delphi" by dark_sister
- "Beautiful piece! My favourite lines are "I give it to her and her cracked teeth.
I give it to her and I give it to me". You capture so much with your words! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "In Passing" by dark_sister
- "Wow. I love it. Puzzleing indeed. The last line was perfect though, "wonders at my wonder" Great write."
Posted by Six-Out on "In Passing" by dark_sister
- "my absolutely fav lines would have to be "Have I nailed my foot to the ground/ so that I can only walk in circles?" I LOVE that. Are earth is confused isn’t it. wonderful s always. Dark Sis ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "The Earth is Confused" by dark_sister
- "it may be short....but its just as good or better than the long ones....great thought put into it...as the title says...the earth is confused...and I agree...I really liked this...keep writing...i wanna read more...yep"
Posted by Unknown on "The Earth is Confused" by dark_sister
- ""I always thought that next year's wisdom would make me perfect."...We sometimes conquer problemsthinking we can finally be free, only to be faced with new ones. Awesome write.
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Posted by Unknown on "Seriously" by dark_sister
- "yaaa!!!! .. this kicks ass . you be you, i'll be me .. scream it into their ears .. awsome write. D&A"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Farest Well" by dark_sister
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