Comments by All Members
- "So much to unpack from such a small number of lines. Intriguing. I can't tell if that last line is haunting or hopeful and it makes me wonder who I would be coming out of the other side. Nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Devil's Math" by dark_sister
- ""A Malaise Personified. A fevered human stalks me," and "There's a shadow of doubt / pacing after me." Wow. These lines just humbled me as a poet."
Posted by Unknown on "Echo" by dark_sister
- "These words were invigorating, like shedding that thick canopy of futility. A powerful sense of understanding the best revenge is not bowing to the same murk that drug you down. Great Write!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Walk With Me" by dark_sister
- "The rhythm is really nice, and I love the lines "and ride your broom into fractured dusk.""
Posted by Unknown on "Banishing" by dark_sister
- "I agree with moony. You have perfectly encapsulated the mythical and fantastic wonderment of the inspiration for this piece. You do tribute wonderfully.--Draven. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Princess and the Goblin" by dark_sister
- "I remember watching the movie the when I was a kid the princess and the goblin and loving it from day one. I still have that movie and this just brings it all back. lovely. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Princess and the Goblin" by dark_sister
- "good poem! I can feel what you are trying to bring up, and even though you might not be here on DP any longer....great write!"
Posted by maggot death on "Heaven, Maybe" by dark_sister
- "Vindictive haha. I really enjoyed the way you chose to describe emotions as a concept of gathering forces to strike with. Beware the wrath of patient plans. Very cool."
Posted by Dilated View on "She Who Comes Between" by dark_sister
- "This was just fantastic I loved how it ended, and how you have a mind of your own and you won't let no one running you into the ground go !"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Farest Well" by dark_sister
- "i wonder about you, as you seem no longer here present at this site... this piece is achingly direct and illuminates a dark feeling most of us can't name..."
Posted by Jonas on "When Home Isn't" by dark_sister
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