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- "....amazing......in a way it makes me feel like a million dead rotted flies come to life and swarm all over me,,i dont know,,good write though love,,really."
Posted by GraveFlower on "deadline confidant" by denver nitze
- "Ive been there too...and once everyone helps themsevles you are left drinking alone. I love the raw emotion you displayed in this piece."
Posted by Narcissa on "deadline confidant" by denver nitze
- "thank you. i was trying to use the lack of rhyme and rhythm to express the harder side of being a listener and not a sharer. the inconsistency in feelings in this situation. it can be hard to take others pains in and help them. especially when you really need to talk to someone, but aren't the type to let others hear your pain. this is a bit personal but was written for anyone who can relate to being that 'shoulder to cry on' but always falling on nothing but your own empty shoulder when it is your turn to cry. like a clown, always spreading joy, not allowed to cry. it is an experimental piece and yet another of my 'hidden messages' thank you for reading it and for your response. *bows* ~ta"
Posted by denver nitze on "deadline confidant" by denver nitze
- "Not the tangled I'm used to reading but this is a clear insight into your current state of mind nonetheless. The scattering of a few rhymes fits in with the mood and overall feel of the piece. If this work expresses your emotion in this "dark place" then it in no way sucks. It captures the purpose of poetry. In my mind anyways"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "deadline confidant" by denver nitze
- "Nice. I really had no idea where this was going when it started. Caught me off guard, that's very hard to do. Good work."
Posted by wilted on "filling my gash" by denver nitze
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