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  • "I feel as though theres a real story behind the well crafted words that you present time and time again, in our life we generally conform to a degree(in our personality) simply to get a state of balance of ourselves, but it doesn't stop our inner ever growing character, and that's what I feel you shared in this(or you may have simply put great words on paper and i'm a rambling dick, either way it was very more'ish."
    Posted by Unknown on "silk lined last wish" by denver nitze
  • "damn it now i'll have that damn thing running through my head all day at work tomorrow... thanks sharon :P j/k as for the write the sadness and melancholy feels like repeated pinpricks to the heart.. the end though for some reason just seemed to be a hit of strength... might just be my mind twisting the way it does... well done "
    Posted by NikesRain on "th.rough." by denver nitze
  • "Nice TA, Loved the flow in this piece. And a theme which all can relate to, all too well. A reaper of hearts/love, and the pain in his wake. Great piece."
    Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "th.rough." by denver nitze
  • "twist it up, spit it out, and there it is. The "too strong to be weak and too weak to be strong" is almost cliche, but it fit nicely with this work, as the rest of it flows back to explain why you said it. Nicely done."
    Posted by Sketso on "whisper contradiction" by denver nitze
  • ".."too strong to be weak and too weak to be strong"..whisper though it may be, this spoke clearly and in volumes. Excellent grasp of emotion. This was a very emotive, provocative ink. Well done, dear. Well done, indeed."
    Posted by Unknown on "whisper contradiction" by denver nitze
  • "my mind and heart tumbled and sighed over the visuals you created with this and the emotions cut off my voice... thank gods i can type at least... great work"
    Posted by NikesRain on "choking on sand" by denver nitze
  • "It's not so much that this one sucks, it's just that you're getting compared to Cephalic Carnage. You'd have to be like...Atheist or Cynic or Death or some other legendary Death Metal band to survive that. Okay, maybe not quite that extreme, but Cepahlic Carnage is fucking awesome and that's all there is too it. SIEG METAL!"
    Posted by Kurashu on "g.rasping o.bvious d.isaster" by denver nitze
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