Comments by All Members
- "oh my fucking god...... if only i could write such magnanimous verse and prose.... i am in......f.u.c.k.i.n.g...a.w.e. for lack of better words"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Ode To Amanda" by Ghost One
- "This is an excellent piece indeed...wanting nothing more than to be graced with the gaze of one you hold high above the rest of the people in the world...to be seen, for even just a moment, by a person you place upon a pedestal. Nice! ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Eyes" by Ghost One
- "i'm drunk aswell. drunk on the fucking glue! rock on man! sweet write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Eyes" by Ghost One
- "i have to wonder if those eyse will be filled with tears... as mine are... if those eyes grace these feeble words... i am striken and no cure, but her penetrating gaze, exsists for me... :("
Posted by Ghost One on "Eyes" by Ghost One
- "silence is the ultimate form of Chaos. listen and it will corrupt you. ~ red."
Posted by Unknown on "..." by Ghost One
- "Brush yourself off and try again...even a 4 lined stanza can be deemed a creative sentiment...and may be more valued in content then a 40 lines poem. Eh...just some thoughts."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "..." by Ghost One
- "haha...hey Ghost, your not the first to do this...or receive such comments. There are so many poems here, that when you click on one...you have an expectation, these types of posts can make the reader feel tricked...which often begits annoyance."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "..." by Ghost One
- "not a waste of time... just kinda of lacking. It is just one of those things that is a risk... did it work? Maybe you are getting responses which means you envoked thought... what are you trying to accomplish."
Posted by lstdarkness on "..." by Ghost One
- "yeah i spose it was a cop out... i just had to write something... i've been having trouble getting my feelings and thoughts to paper as of late. and just couldn't stand it anymore. i'm sorry if you felt it was a waste of your time. :("
Posted by Ghost One on "..." by Ghost One
- "the absences of sound........ makes me feel like a masterpiece."
Posted by elisa on "..." by Ghost One
- "its worse because i had to scroll down to even know it wasn't worth looking at. "
Posted by glasshouse on "..." by Ghost One
- ""Dusty tavern tramp," priceless. Heart-wrenching and funny. Bitter sweet. A true example of the oxy-moron that is existence. I always enjoy your colorful adjectives."
Posted by Unknown on "Ode to Adultry" by Ghost One
- "I thought that too, Elisa. :) Anyway, I really liked the line "She sways into the arms of ones and zeros"... it hit something in me. "
Posted by KittyStryker on "Ode to Adultry" by Ghost One
- "I can't help but wonder what comes first...or who put no effort forth initially...I can decipher this two ways. Those tavern tramps...spreading the disease of infidelity:P"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Ode to Adultry" by Ghost One
- "how dare she fornicate ....the filthy temptress....who does she think she is.. a Man......hehe ... jk.... nice write... very biblical."
Posted by elisa on "Ode to Adultry" by Ghost One
- "So sad and powerful...I wish I could tell this person to love themselves and the rest will come tumbling after."
Posted by soul dancer on "Thankful?" by Ghost One
- "yes you are right it WAS pointless. but i am happy to have wasted a few meager minutes of your pitiful exsitences. thank you for taking the time to domment though, bad comments still please me. not like i'm even proud of this work, but i wrote it, and wha"
Posted by Ghost One on "Ha! I am a moron!!" by Ghost One
- "*yawns* Was there a point to this? Did it have any purpose? I smell troll. And this one hasn't been showering for a long, long time. Y'know what? *rawr* Fuck off."
Posted by Guillotine on "Ha! I am a moron!!" by Ghost One
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