Comments by All Members
- "This poem made me cry. It is very good. Great work. I really enjoyed reading this."
Posted by BrokenKatra on "Alone" by up_at_five
- "i really enjoyed this. the fight or flight...ever present time aspect. you brought in some interesting combinations. nice work"
Posted by RubyXero on "Todays Nightmare" by up_at_five
- "i feel this, makes me think of my job and how much i hate it... though on the contrary, maybe spell check, unless i am mistaken, mucos is actually mucus... simply an attempt at giving constructive critisisim"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Todays Nightmare" by up_at_five
- "Fan-bloomin'-tastic! Every word took this piece into the ascendency whilst it spoke of your descent from love and a broken heart...Magnifico!! -carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Elizabeth's Song" by up_at_five
- "dad....you guys'll get through-i've seen you together...and whatever this is you can work through....but this write, i love it...maybe not what it comes from...but it's great....love ya crista"
Posted by vaultgrl on "The NewBorn" by up_at_five
- "I am struck.. senseless. All too real. Umm.. you forgot the t in capture. o.O)) oop. ~b"
Posted by blue on "The NewBorn" by up_at_five
- "I love the word play in this very nicely written and choice of words ... and it is so true to "
Posted by Cattarax on "Lifes Storm" by up_at_five
- "The last four lines really struck home...my name is Elizabeth, which is one of the first things that drew me to this piece...but your words are enchanting, and they captured me in their net. Wonderful write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Elizabeth's Song" by up_at_five
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