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Elizabeth's Song
By up_at_five
Decembers north wind Blows
to find me in a sullen mood
for spent time wasted seems to
me, like a wayward travesty
To spend much more time we would
be, trapped in just a fantasy
please make it easy, make it quick
Cut the strings don't let them stick
A life with you I can not bare
I wish the past held no care
For time with you
My armour rent
and place upon
My heart a dent
For whence it came I wish it go
My heart is broken we both know
though time ahead indeed uncertain
I wish to pull and draw the curtain
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© 2006 up_at_five
Comments on "Elizabeth's Song"
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On Thursday, February 23, 2012, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
It's fucking awesome to find some one new to read on here with such beautiful word choice.
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On Monday, April 23, 2007, carlosjackal
(3018) wrote:
Fan-bloomin'-tastic! Every word took this piece into the ascendency whilst it spoke of your descent from love and a broken heart...Magnifico!! -carl
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I agree with wonderland. Was a pleasure to read
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A former member wrote:
Tender sort of devastating. Extremely well written.
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A former member wrote:
i love this poem...great work
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On Tuesday, May 2, 2006, Dei
(665) wrote:
good title. Good begining but the last stanza... well done indeed
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A former member wrote:
Beatiful
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A former member wrote:
The last four lines really struck home...my name is Elizabeth, which is one of the first things that drew me to this piece...but your words are enchanting, and they captured me in their net. Wonderful write. *Evangel*
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