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Todays Nightmare
By up_at_five
Floating in a sea of vile mucos
movement hindered in any direction
aggonising over each breath
hounds close behinnd me baying
to make thier presance known
darkness has befallen my sight
blocking any light that might
fall upon my gloomy path
marching on not knowing why
following as a slave the
ticks of time as it
marches ever onward
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© 2008 up_at_five
Published on Tuesday, January 22, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Friday, January 25, 2008, RubyXero
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wrote:
i really enjoyed this. the fight or flight...ever present time aspect. you brought in some interesting combinations. nice work
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On Tuesday, January 22, 2008, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
i feel this, makes me think of my job and how much i hate it... though on the contrary, maybe spell check, unless i am mistaken, mucos is actually mucus... simply an attempt at giving constructive critisisim
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