Could this be treasure

By up_at_five

What a breath of fresh air, a warm summers breeze
A rope, a hand up, a suddun reprieve
My hearts door was closed, never thought it would open
Dare I think now I've found something to hope in

Time while we talk has been such a pleasure
Have I stumbled apon a long hidden treasure
As we sit on the phone and talk the night long
Time passes us by without anything wrong

I listen I speak as I grin ear to ear
and suddunly think there is'nt a fear
Hope is a powerful allie and friend
Slowly we nurture so as not to end

Suddenly the sun it just seems so bright
to think all our time spent could end in delight
So lets not rush, lets just take our time
I hope my joy comes through all this Rhyme

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Copyright 2010 up_at_five
Published on Thursday, January 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: love this..... awesome job!

  • A former member wrote: Well constructed my friend, the flow was especially nice :)

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