Comments by All Members
- "I don't think I've ever been this much effected by a piece in my life...it's so elaborate and sultry...up until the very last line. I must favorite."
Posted by Unknown on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "oh-my-god. the ending left my heart before me as a doormat to be abused. im purging my lungs of air-and inhaling the new day. totally heartbreaking-and im saying the least. incredible. incredible. incredible. repeat 3x ;)"
Posted by Twilight on "c o r onary_calamitous." by slow.burn.star
- "beautiful, and very delicate, every word had its own meaning.. the ending is very sad, but this to me seems like a tribute in a way to writing, the passion of it and romance.. in a bitter way, beautiful though, great write :D"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "c o r onary_calamitous." by slow.burn.star
- "'you're eyes like fluttering doves at dawn's rise'...the structure you've used here appears somewhat different to your usual style,though theres something about this that still makes it clear that this is your work...if that makes sense...just something a"
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "no words are around to describe how this left me...fucking amazing...not just how it's written...but the emotions, the feelings it evoked. I love it when you post, don't leave us for that long again.."
Posted by Six-Out on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- ""no more stars in your stare. and your dreams- are dripping"...such a great line. I love the imagery of the whole piece...really clear and clean in each line"
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "incredbile, the flash to parts are cool and give it an electrifying pace,flashes of beautifully described images and emotions, relentless"
Posted by Anth on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "...'so perfect in your sleep weeping tears like glass against the plae of your cheek you dreamed for me.as the waves licked the sand and somewhere over the azure abyss where the sky meets the sea..it waits'...wow....and I thought the ending was fantastic."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "vintageviolence" by slow.burn.star
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