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- "...but there was...no preparing myself for the ending...it stole my breath...pure brilliance that one could never enough of...lush imagery...I could go on for days.lol.I've read this several times..."
Posted by suicideseason on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "Oh My God...Totally orgasmic...flawlessly delivered...My heart skipped a beat.From the beginning the tone was black and ominous...deliverence was not going to be offered...there was no question about that..."
Posted by suicideseason on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "You capture the integrity of feelings and put them to words...still all of the emotion is in tact...not a hair out of place,so to speak.Heart wrenching...bitter truth that you sum up all too well.Exquisite piece."
Posted by suicideseason on "c o r onary_calamitous." by slow.burn.star
- "You attracted me to the tittle and im in no regret to have read this. What a fantastic poem that has unleashed my mind of a barrier. Loved it."
Posted by Unknown on "The Queen of Bones:." by slow.burn.star
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I read this almost in the vein of my favorite poet Sapphire. It is magnificent and captures time in its movement and simple drive. Including enticing detail. Oddly wonderful."
Posted by jaunty pill on "c o r onary_calamitous." by slow.burn.star
- "the last three lines cut to the center of this piece... moved enough to leave these little words - jonas"
Posted by Jonas on "leatherette" by slow.burn.star
- ""Like rotting flowers and old beauty queens.
to rise and fall, and make something from the ashes.as temporary and reliable as a shadow.", imagery just vintage and uniquely beautiful. words:: amazing. wonderful write
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Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The Queen of Bones:." by slow.burn.star
- "I'll never be amazed at how some people can take a thought and carry it so far! Applause! I bow to you. B"
Posted by blue on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "Psychedelic to say the least. I'd have to sleep on this one to give any words worthy of this venture. Provocative piece, indulgent and sharply conceived. -END-"
Posted by Unknown on "leatherette" by slow.burn.star
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