Comments by All Members
- "Some of the lines in here were great; "come with... the sun" and the last lines of the poem, however it sounded a little forcibly rhymed... good stuff though, just work on your rhythm."
Posted by Guillotine on "Oh Baby" by DeviantxSeraph
- "i have to take notes, this is big... so many different side streets / ave's that the mind can wander... i am speechless, this is one of the best writes i have seen in a while... magnanimous.... an example of how divine art can be."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Dissilience" by DeviantxSeraph
- "Where is all the praise? This is something far above the usual. I can imagine you sitting in the backseat, watching scenery fly by, and scribbling downt these words. I love this."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Changing Lanes" by DeviantxSeraph
- "You spoke so direct but artistacly. It was intricate but easily understood. I dont know what I am saying. I just cant really express how great I thought it was."
Posted by Silence on "Shattered Love" by DeviantxSeraph
- "That actually brought a tear to my eye. I have never had that happen from reading anothers work before. That was a amazing. "
Posted by Silence on "Shattered Love" by DeviantxSeraph
- "woot! the vehemence of true love... sounds very passionate and singularly committed; I can only imagine a love that loves so strongly, nice write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Shattered Love" by DeviantxSeraph
- "I loved the turns in this. The odd-scheme. It was delightful. If a poem can keep me enterested to the end, it's good. This one had me wishing it were longer. Good write."
Posted by Six-Out on "Android Lust" by DeviantxSeraph
- "This was very well written, your usage of words were interestingly intelligent. Much enjoyed. The last line kinda threw me, =) but, I like being thrown at times. Cheers! ~b"
Posted by blue on "Pity for Humanity" by DeviantxSeraph
- "Your speech is inviting and seductive, you sell yourself short on the depth of your capability. Let your passion continue to lead you. Be not concerned with others approval. If it's beautiful in your eyes it is beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Pity for Humanity" by DeviantxSeraph
- "I like ur skills.. there deadly.. this poem i really like for some reason i don't know of.. but good job
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Posted by Unknown on "Changing Lanes" by DeviantxSeraph
- "This is an amazing piece of work. I like the way you visualise the emotion you are going through with the line, "My mind in utter woe, My heart being battered."
Well done"
Posted by Unknown on "Shattered Love" by DeviantxSeraph
