Android Lust
By DeviantxSeraph
Lustful innocence
Decietful mentallity
Plastic organs
Drawn on veins
Silencing your sleep
People,they are weak
Android,
Fear me
Leave me
Bite me
Tease me
Obcessed over tinks and toys
Broken bindes
Sacred and divine
Anticipating
Jealousy
Watchful
Fake
Painted longing lips and eyes of steel
Deception made for none to conceal
I'm giving my life to your machines
I grow weary of routines
My mind is lost in lustful illusions
Toy games
Uncalled-for names
They signify you as-
artificial
counterfeit
fraudulent
a mockery
To me,you're spirited beauty
Assembled heart
A beating drum
Awakened sounds
Your voice astounds
Android,
you smell of inticing phosphite
Your fingers made of tastful calcites
Thy lust and thy heart
Wollow beneath your feet of grain
For you,I am eternaly vane
Comments on "Android Lust"
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
good god, this would make a wonderfull song... need to check more of you for sure.
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On Monday, May 15, 2006, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I loved the turns in this. The odd-scheme. It was delightful. If a poem can keep me enterested to the end, it's good. This one had me wishing it were longer. Good write.
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A former member wrote:
the occasional rhyme scheme and alliteration really helped this along, cool stuff indeed.
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A former member wrote:
very provokative... enticing with a novel theme and fresh perspective... nice!
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On Monday, May 1, 2006, A poet of madness
(114) wrote:
an intriguing write. I like! I like!